Critique Comments:
- Add margin to inside right of pamphlet
- More Hiearchy in type; vary color/weight to make it more child/family friendly
- Brighter/different colors so edge of the map doesn't get lose
- Add margin at the bottom of the pamphlet so bottom matches top
- Call things out with hiearchy (larger) to appeal to kids, smaller more detailed information for adults
- Scale down everything, size, type size, picture size
- Represent amenities with icons on map
- Brighten Color
- Remove white background from Des Moines logo (or remove logo completely)
- Smaller/less pictures
- Typo in Amenities section (useage > usage)
- Use a stronger image for the cover
- Pick 3/4 images to use rather than all
- Check for widows/orphans and uppercase in lists
- Title for events?
- Don't stretch image across 2 panels
- Make categories more clearly grouped together
I'm not sure if I'll be using all these comments but I'll certainly consider them.
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