Tuesday, March 12, 2013

March 12:: Post Critique

Personal Comments:

I liked the background texture when I initally was using it, but when it's printed out, it just looks like a kind of mold. I don't plan on using it anymore because of this reason. Furniture shouldn't make you think of mold.

I'm semi indifferent on the border I used on some of the elements, though I'm probably going to play with it more to see what I can come up with.

I completely dislike the poster. I want to check out more furniture images and use them as is instead of trying to pull the image off of a background (ex. pulling something out of a black bg).

Viewer Comments:

- Vertical Logo is more liked
- Don't bleed parts off the page; takes away from unity
- Good Typeface Choices
- Integrate borders further --same size-- throughout the pieces
- Let the underlying composition be the linking force
- Remove box from logo
- Tweak colors to be more bright -- more forcefully
- Scale consistiency

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